I kept expecting this club to play a role in the later half of the book. (Drawback- I wish he had joined this club to get more action) He later joined a different secret club. The only thing of value in this chapter was He turned down their offer to join the club. They defended the school from werewolves. Early in the book there was a scene where he was invited to an elite secret club. This book would benefit from a good edit. The character reactions in this story missed the mark several times and kicked me out of the story. There is a huge difference in behavior, interests, and reactions between these ages. Often they write a 12 year old but the character acts more like a 9 year old. Sometimes I find that authors that haven’t spent much time around kids this age miss the mark in judging how they behave. I know how kids of this age typically behave. I have taught middle school (6-8th grade) for almost 20 years. At one point something happened and I expected the character to be appalled, but he laughed his head off. Sometimes the characters reactions seemed incongruous. I love a good thriller mystery.) Characters
(This is what grabbed my attention causing me to request this book for review. But he doesn’t know how since he’s dead and she’s alive.
He also remembers a tiny snippet of his old life. He quickly learns that he’s dead and this is the Afterlife. He has no memory other than his name is Peter. Peter wakes up at a train station wearing pajamas and a tie.
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